New Crew, Mission End

Posted on Tue Jul 16th, 2019 @ 1:53am by Commodore Nathan Russ

Ok, so the mission is wrapping up. After this there will be a couple days for every one to recollect them selves, find any new motivation they may need to write, then the next mission will kick off. Officially every one is expected to post something between Monday July 22nd and Friday July 26th.

I would also like to see a little more development to what is being written. Some times its too easy to get into just one line replies when its a conversation, but keep in mind, when your WRITING a conversation, your character is thinking something while talking. So try to include thoughts every so often. Maybe describe how your character is physically reacting or acting in the conversation.

With this said, we have a new member. The character that is joining has show outstanding writing abilities. I have no doubt she will boost the level of writing and help us all be better players. Welcome to the Yamato Stephanie whose character name is also Stephenie (Faire). She will be joining the ship during the time between the end of this mission and the beginning of the next mission.

Finally, I want to compliment you all on a wonderful first mission. It was a bit short just so not to bore any one early on ;) ;). But you were all great and I am so proud to have you all as my crew. Lets have fun conquering the galaxy.

Sincerely,
Sam
AKA
Captain Nathan Russ
ISS Yamato
Bravo Fleet TF99 (only the BEST tf in BF)

 

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